The sun set in a blaze of fire across the hills of Kadesh,
illuminating the grasslands below in patterns of light and shadow as
the burning clouds drifted across the silvering sky. The light fell
on the ancient city of Hatara, turning the stone walls to gold and
touching the tips of the high towers with points of fiery light, like
the points of spears. Eagles circled overhead in the deepening dusk,
and drums pounded to drive away the breath of evil, for a king lay
dying.
Arnuzana, the War-lord, the Thunder-breaker, lay in his chambers
awash in the dying sun, and all knew he would not see it rise again.
The wind from the far seas was cool, and it fluttered the curtains
and the horsetails that hung from the pillars of the great bed. Age
had sunken the flesh on his lean face, leaving behind his narrow
mouth and hawk nose like monuments. His eyes were wide-set and dark,
almost slitted from many years of squinting through wind and dust.
He was a warrior-king, or he had been. Now time and infirmity robbed
him of his strength in his last hours.
Servants and slaves clustered in the shadows of the room, but it was
only to his three sons that he spoke, his voice ragged and dry as the
wastelands of his desert home, far away to the east and the north.
He did not speak the complicated, whispering speech of Ashem, but the
jagged words of his native tongue.
“When my father lay dying it was in a tent made of horsehides, and
he rose as his last breath came and went forth to the hunt. He rode
his horse into the wastes and struck down a lion with arrow and
spear, and only when it had been brought down did he fall. He died
with his hands red with lion blood, and so always I, his son, was
named the Brother to Lions.” He licked his thin lips, and a slave
came and helped him to drink from a golden cup, wiped carefully at
the thinning gray beard.
He looked at his three sons, and shook his head slightly. “I was
the only son of my father to live until the day he died, and so there
was no blooding to decide who would be chief. My brother Murso had
died years before, and my only sister had been born dead.” He
nodded. “I have led us to a new land. I have conquered for us a
kingdom. I was born the son of a chief in a tent with a dirt floor,
and I die a king on silken sheets.”
He smiled, showing his yellowing teeth. “But there is a cost for
all things. Because I have made us great and powerful, so more of us
have lived. You are all my sons, and you have all survived to see my
last day. None of you have died from fever, or hunger, or the arrows
of our enemies. In our old days there would be killing among you
until only one remained, and that strongest one would become the new
chief.”
Arnuzana paused and caught his breath. “I am less than my father,
and more at the same time. I would not have my sons kill one
another. I would not have you follow me close to the dark world.
Yet still, one must be chosen as worthy. War comes from the
southlands, and the kingdom of Ashem is weak. So I shall put my
throne in the hands of Ezurhad, god of the sky and the fires of
lightning.” He beckoned them. “Come close, my sons.”
“Ammuna, my oldest and most gifted son. You are all a father could
wish. Hanta, clever beyond your years, wise as no young man is wise.
You are already an elder. Zudur, giant among lesser men, greatest
warrior of my blood. You shall become a great lord of war.” He
coughed and caught his breath. They three young men gathered at his
bedside, the slaves and attendants moving back in respect.
The king breathed for a moment, the air rattling inside him, but when
he opened his eyes they were sharp and alive. “You must all three
swear to abide by this. Tonight you shall go with your horses to the
plains east of the city, and there you shall await the dawn tomorrow.
When the first light of day touches the sky, then one of your steeds
shall cry out in welcome, and thus shall the will of Ezurhad be
known. The prince whose horse first answers the sun, he shall be
king. Now swear by arrow and by spear that you shall obey this, each
of you.”
Ammuna, tall and straight and handsome, bowed his head and touched
his breast. “I swear that I shall obey this.” He looked at his
brothers as if daring them to defy.
It was known that Hanta, well-learned and sharp-minded, had little
faith in any gods. He gave a dark glance, and then he bowed his head
as well. “For the final wish of my father, I shall obey, and I do
swear.”
They turned to look at Zudur, the youngest of the three, and he
towered over the both of them. He was a giant, but a misshapen one.
His shoulders were broad, but one was hunched higher than the other,
and when he moved, he walked with a limp on a twisted leg. He met
their gazes and curled his lip. “I put no faith on gods or
portents. Gods do not make kings, only blood can do that.” He
looked down at his father, and then he bent and put his huge hand on
his fathers shoulder. “But for my father, I will swear as he
commands.” He straightened and looked at his brothers. “I will
have no man say that I was less than either of you. I too know
honor.”
King Arnuzana closed his eyes and breathed, the sound like dirt
inside him, as though his bones were breaking loose. “I am
pleased, my sons. Thank you. Follow the gods, and you will be
guided to the right path, as I was. From darkness, follow the way of
light.”
o0o
The king died in the deep of night, his breath slowing and slowing,
the rattle in his chest becoming louder until he let out a long, last
rush of air and was still. The slaves and servants pressed their
faces to the floor, and the three princes bowed their heads as the
drummers on the walls and towers beat out the battle call for their
dead chief. He had led his people out of the desert and to rulership
of a nation, and now he was gone.
The shamans took his body away. They would see he was wrapped in
cloths soaked in fine oils and then sewn into a horsehide. In the
morning he would be laid upon a bier decked with flowers, and when
the sun was high they would call on Ezurhad to bear his spirit away
to the land behind the rising sun, the golden pastures on the other
side of the winds. Then they would burn him, and his flesh would be
consumed and carried away upon the smoke.
By then there would be a new king, and the three princes left the
city at midnight with the sickle moon overhead. Each of them rode
his finest horse and was accompanied by a single groom on his own
light steed. They had agreed that no one else should witness the
choice of the gods. It was an oath and a compact to be kept among
the sons of the king. Even the grooms were chosen from only among
their own people, for no one not of the blood of the Hadad could be
favored by Ezurhad the stormfather.
They rode through the eastern gate, past the greening mounds of earth
where those who had fought against them when they took the city were
heaped and buried. It had been twenty years since the invasion, and
only Ammuna, the eldest son, even remembered it. They followed the
road that led outward and through the irrigated fields, winding their
way beyond the environs of the city until the ground rose and became
rougher. They passed sheep and goat pastures now, and there were
more trees. As the night waned they made their way through the stony
hills and out into the highlands where the horizons vanished into
hazy distance, and looking to the east they saw nothing save the
shadows that led toward the lands where their race had been born, far
away.
They came to a place where the ground was rugged and great stones
jutted up from the earth among high grasses, like pillars in some
primordial temple. There was a hollow here that looked toward the
east without obstruction. Here they would see the sun the moment it
touched the horizon, and the choice would be made. Together their
grooms withdrew behind them and the three princes sat on their steeds
alone, facing the eastern lands. The stars were still a river of
silver light overhead, but the east had begun to pale as the day came
closer.
The moon was gone, and they said nothing to each other as the sky
grew lighter, and the stars began to fade away. The chill that comes
before dawn made their steeds shiver and dew gleam on grass and
stone. Birds began to sing as the winds shifted and blew across them
all, bearing the scent of the sea, far to the north, beyond sight.
Somewhere, out in the darkness, a lion called.
The horizon paled, and the sky turned silver, then orange. The first
ray of sun blazed at the edge of the world, and then Ammuna’s horse
shuddered, stumbled, and collapsed upon the earth. The tall prince
leaped free and fell hard to the grass, gasping in shock as his horse
stretched out on the grass and vomited forth blood in a torrent.
It was Hanta’s horse who tossed his head and screamed forth as the
sky turned to fire, and the middle prince laughed. “It would seem
the gods do not favor you, my elder brother.”
Zudur snarled and turned his steed. “I saw you.”
Hanta looked at him, watchful. “Saw what?”
“I saw you jab your steed with a needle hidden in your hand just as
the sun rose,” the giant brother said from astride his heavy horse.
“Did you poison Ammuna’s beast?”
Hanta smiled. “I poisoned yours as well, but the heavy thing seems
to be slower to succumb.”
Zudur felt his steed shift under him, and then he was thrown aside as
it crumpled, groaning terribly as it was consumed by the poison
inside it. The giant prince fell hard to the grass, his lame leg
folding beneath his weight. He looked up at Hanta and showed his
teeth. “You will die for this.”
“I will? I will be king by noontide, and neither of you will
return from this place.” Hanta turned and looked down at Ammuna.
“Have you anything to say to me?”
Ammuna smiled. “I would say the same thing.”
There was a sound of arrows, and the grooms cried out as they were
cut down. Their horses screamed and scattered, arrows sticking out
of their necks and sides. There was a sound of hooves, and armed men
rushed from the dark. Hanta ducked as arrows came for him, and then
he spurred his horse to speed. Zudur struggled up and hurled himself
back among the rocks, taking cover as humming shafts sought his life.
He heard Ammuna laugh then. “I had planned to kill you both,” he
said. “But it seems Hanta has begun the blooding early, though it
will not save him.” A knot of men rode off after Hanta’s steed,
dust rising in their wake. “It will not save you either, my beast
of a brother.”
Zudur shifted back into the shadow between the towering stones, and
he drew his sword and held it ready. The horizon was a kingdom of
fire, and now there would be blood for the gods.
o0o
They came for him then, two men pressing into the rift between the
boulders, while three more rode out to the side. Zudur knew they
would try to find a way to come in behind him and strike while he was
facing down the men in front. He could not wait for them or he would
be pinned in between them, and if he went into the open they would
fill him with arrows.
The two came in with their spears held up and ready, thinking they
would force him back. Zudur grunted and reached up, ripped a branch
from the tree beside him and hurled it at the man on the left. Even
one-handed, he threw a branch as thick as a man’s leg, and it
struck the soldier and dashed him to the ground. Even as the other
man turned and swore an oath, Zudur lunged forward.
He was not fast on his feet with his lame leg, but once he was
moving, he was not easy to stop. He dashed the spearpoint aside and
seized the man as arrows splintered on the rocks around him. He
lifted his opponent off his feet and used him as a shield, feeling
the impacts as arrows punched through the scaled armor and buried
themselves in flesh. The soldier gasped and twisted, but then he
sagged as his lifeblood ran out of him.
Zudur roared and stomped on the other man as he tried to rise; one
blow of his twisted leg snapped the soldier’s spine and crushed him
to the ground. He screamed and Zudur let him, retreating back into
the narrow pass between the rocks as arrows pursued him into the
shadows. The sun was rising higher, and more light would be his
enemy now.
He heard men coming through the thicket behind him, and he turned and
rushed toward the sound. With the corpse held before him as a
shield, he could not see his enemies, only hear them in the shadows.
He thundered through the scrub brush and twisted trees, snapping off
branches as he went, and they shouted when they saw him coming.
A spear slammed into the body, the point emerging red from the
corpse’s breastplate just a hair from his red-stained hand where it
was knotted on the belt. He hacked through the haft with his sword
and then he was among them. He hewed at their forms in the
half-light, felt his blade strike home and then hot blood splattered
his face.
He hurled the body onto another man, and then he struck at the third
soldier and his sword split the edge of his shield and carved a piece
from it, the force of the blow driving the man to his knees. He put
his foot on the upraised shield and crushed him down to the ground,
snapping bones with his full weight.
The last man shoved the corpse aside and struggled to his feet, hand
fumbling on the ground for his fallen sword. Zudur reached out and
caught him by the front of his armor, scales snapping loose under his
grip, and then he just lifted the man and drove his sword into his
mouth and through his skull.
They were coming behind him now, and he didn’t know how many men
his brother had brought with him. His horse was dead, and none of
the small steeds the others had brought with them would carry his
weight. Even if he could get to a horse, he would not escape them.
More than that, now he was angry.
He heard a new sound behind him then and he turned, sword held ready,
and then he saw eyes glowing in the shadows. Something huge moved in
the dark, growling, and he saw it was a lion. It was immense, as
tall as a man, with a black mane, and it moved with a curious, slow
gait. He realized its rear right leg was partly lame, and it limped
as it stalked forward. It was a young lion, but he saw scars on its
muzzle and heavy limbs. It was a fighter, like him.
Zudur felt no fear, not of this beast. He did not question why it
was here. Perhaps it had lain in a hidden hollow among the rocks
during the night, and now it rose to the scent of blood. It looked
at him and licked its heavy teeth, and he smiled. Unafraid, he
turned away and caught up two spears in one hand, a fallen sword in
the other, and then he rushed out into the open, moving as fast as he
could, filled with fury and the hunger to kill.
He found himself facing a half-circle of six riders, his brother at
the center of them. With a roar, Zudur hurled a spear at Ammuna. He
threw with such force that as his brother’s horse reared and
twisted, the shaft passed cleanly through the animal’s neck and
then impaled the man on the next horse, spraying blood into the air
like a hot geyser.
And then the lion burst from the shadows behind him, its roar
overshadowing even his. It was a blur of golden hide and flashing
teeth, and it hurtled upon a rearing horse like a bolt of fire.
Claws raked through the tough hide, and he saw the long fangs plunge
into the horse’s skull and crush it in a flood of crimson.
Men and animals screamed, and the horses reared and fought to get
away. Ammuna’s horse crashed to the earth, blood pouring from its
torn throat, and Zudur limped toward his brother as he rolled on the
grass, clawing for his sword.
Soldiers rushed him from the sides, and Zudur impaled one on his
second spear and ripped him from the saddle. A spear smote on his
armor and he turned and cut at the man with his sword, splintering
the haft. The horse shied away and Zudur caught the man with a
backhand stroke that almost cut him in half, spilling entrails as he
slid from the saddle and fell to the ground in a bloody mess.
The lion moved like his shadow, one swipe of a claw ripping a man
apart, another tearing the leg from a horse that came too near.
Then Ammuna was on his feet, closing on him with a spear held in his
hand, and he drove it in. Zudur tried to dash it aside, but he was
slow and it tore along his side, drawing a bright gout of blood. He
struck his brother on the helm and iron rang on bronze, denting the
bright gilding and sending him reeling away. Zudur clutched his side
and staggered back to stand beside the crouching lion, and he gripped
his sword fiercely, awaiting the final rush.
o0o
Hanta entered the throne hall with an honor guard of soldiers, men of
the old tribes with scaled armor and short bows in the cases at their
sides. It was night, and he had spent the day putting his city in
order, after a hard morning out-riding the men his brother sent after
him. He had told the tale that his brothers had tried to slay him,
and the arrow-wound he bore on his left arm was a testament he
thanked them for, as it proved his claim. He sent criers through the
streets to proclaim that the gods had chosen him as the new king,
even as he sent riders out into the grasslands to hunt for his
brothers.
Now, as night fell, there was unrest in the city. Zudur carried
great weight with the armies, and they disliked any speech against
him. Riders were gathering, milling in the streets and squares,
working themselves into a fury. They had respect for Ammuna as well,
and little for Hanta, and so he knew they would be trouble.
The men guarding him were loyal, he knew that, but the rest of the
palace was held by native men of Kadesh, who could hold the
fortifications against horsemen. Hanta knew riders could not hurl
their strength against high walls. When their father had taken the
city, it had been by treachery – men who had detested the old king
had opened the gates and let them in, and once inside, they could not
be stopped.
He went to the throne and looked at it, remembering his father and
feeling a flash of guilt for what he had done. Yet Ammuna had
plotted to kill them all the same. If Zudur had not plotted for the
throne, then he was a fool, as much a fool as they had always thought
he was.
Looking down from the windows, he saw torches moving in the streets,
and the sounds of clashing iron rose up to him. Fighting had begun,
and he cursed. He seated himself on the throne, feeling uneasy yet
defiant. “Vizier. Vizier!” He waited for his father’s chief
minister to answer him, but no one did. He looked in the corners of
the hall for slaves, but none lurked there, awaiting commands. He
felt fear race up his back, and he stood. “Guards!”
A shadow dropped from the gallery above and crashed to the floor hard
enough to crack the tiles. Hanta reeled back as he looked on the
blood-smeared apparition of his brother Zudur. His armor was rent
and torn, blood stained his arms and legs. In one hand he gripped a
notched and bloodied sword, in the other he held the head of Ammuna
by a fistful of hair. The eldest brother’s dead eyes wept blood
tears.
Hanta screamed and Zudur hurled his grisly trophy onto the throne,
where it splashed red on the golden silks. The guards saw the giant
prince there, blooded and terrible, and some of them turned and fled,
crying out that the curse of the gods had come to the throne room. A
half-dozen of them, pale and afraid, yet drew their swords and rushed
to attack.
Now Hanta saw his misshapen brother in full fury, and it was
terrifying. Zudur brushed aside sword-strokes as though they were
made with reeds, and his own strokes chopped through armor and bone,
spilled men on the floor in wreckage. Blood spattered on the floor
and the shining pillars, sizzled when it fell on the oil-flames of
the lamps. Zudur made hideous, snarling sounds as he butchered the
men, the grunts and roars sounding like a beast.
Something guttered behind him like grinding stones, and Hanta turned
and looked into the golden eyes of a lion more massive than any he
had ever seen. It limped forward, favoring its back leg – the same
leg Zudur favored, and he felt a thrill of superstitious dread run
through him like a wound. It looked at him with its eyes both
unfeeling and hungry, and he shrank back from it.
He stumbled over a body and fell hard to the bloody floor. He looked
up and his brother loomed over him, a red-painted shape of terror.
Hanta held up his hands, shielding his face. “Please, please. Our
father would not wish you to slay me. The gods will curse you if you
spill my blood here in the throne room. I beg you, forgive me and
let me live!”
“It shall not be me who spills your blood,” Zudur said, and he
stepped away as the lion moved in, its jaws opening, dripping red.
Hanta screamed and tried to crawl away, but then his world was all
teeth, and he was ripped out of himself.
o0o
Zudur watched the beast devour his brother, and he said a small
request that his kindred be welcomed in the afterworld. They had
both died in battle, and so the Thunder-Thrower might yet show them
favor. Hanta had begged for his life, it was true, but surely the
gods would overlook that. He had not been a coward.
He moved wearily, feeling his wounds and the weight of fatigue from
his long walk back to the city. He lifted Ammuna’s head from the
throne and cast it aside, sat down on the golden seat and stabbed his
notched sword into the arm, where it quivered. Now he would be the
king of Kadesh, as his father had been before him. He had not chosen
it, had not sought it out, but it had come to him.
Guards flooded into the room, with his father’s vizier at their
head. The lion roared and stood in front of the throne, and the men
drew back, terror on their faces. One by one they bowed, eyes cast
downward, until even the chief minister made his obeisance.
Zudur smiled, feeling the pain of his wounds, and he put his hand on
the beast as it stretched out at his feet. “Now there is a new
king,” he said. “Bring me water and a new sword, and we shall do
what must be done.”
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